Camp Bentzon Presentation

Here is a little snippet of what happened at our Year 6 Camp. You should watch it to see what happens in Camp Bentzon. So hope you will Enjoy!!

My Friends

Here is a Presentation. That is actually showing, and telling you things about my Friends. Hope you enjoy!!

My Writing Test ( End Of The Year) 2013

The Sun had just risen and by then it was time to Milk the sheep. Getting dressed and ready  I walked slowly to the Barn. I was halfway there and by then the Sun had shone bright into my eyes.

As soon as I got near the Barn I heard this  voice it was a SCARY. It was kind of a whisper too. I had started to panic when I got closer to the shed I got quieter and quieter. I had looked behind me and no one was there. I was the only one home everyone went to the Carnival. While trying to run back home the Noise got louder and louder.

I tried walking backwards and it still didn't work. So then it got even more creepier. It was almost Bedtime and I still hadn't done my job.  So then I just got on with it and kept on walking. There it goes again “ Mooooo!!” I hadn't heard that sound before.

Until I got to the Barn I looked around and it looked like we had a new animal. I wasn't sure what it was until dad came home and told me it was a Cow. As I whispered to myself “ Finally I got the chance to know what that was” Then I heard another voice and it sounded like a person calling Dad and I’s name.

But that was weird cause only Me, Dad and baby Leo was the only one’s who were living in the Farm. It was maybe Mum. Whispering telling us to get inside already. She was right though cause it looked like it was about to rain.  By then Mum’s Spirit had gave us good Luck.

Halloween

WALT: was to Show not Tell when writing a paragraph. 

Stomping my feet as hard as I could I made all the kids Runaway. I lay down onto the couch as people had came knocking on our doors. As three girls came towards the door  I yelled "Sorry Wrong House" with a scary voice.  I had looked towards the door and more people had been stomping by. But then I looked and it was my Mum. Or was it??  

Rugby League World Cup 2013 (Free Blog Writing)

These past few weeks and days. The Rugby World Cup had started. Rugby world Cup is for League NOT Union. It is going to be the BEST Rugby World Cup ever. I am going for the team Tonga and the Kiwis, which is New Zealand.  

Why you may ask? Well I am from the Island of tonga and I live in New Zealand. Samoa and New Zealand has already played now we are just waiting for Scotland and Tonga to Play. The Score for the Samoa vs Kiwis game was 42 to Kiwis and 24 for Samoa. So that is a quite a BIG score. Hard luck for Samoa though.

I am still waiting for the Tonga and Scotland game to Start. 

SO GO TONGA AND KIWIS WOO HOO!!!!

Rainbows End The "New Theme Park" Narrative

Highlighted in Blue is my Mark and in the Yellow is my Friends. 

It was one of those hot Sunny days, where Boys had the house to themselves Playing Games All Day long. Summer had just started yesterday, so it was the second day of the MOST hottest days ever. TJ got bored and said to Jermaine “ Why bother play games can we do something  else?” Jermaine replied with a weird face “ Umm yeah why can't we just like watch a little bit of  Television”

It was like a miracle that they had turned of the Play Station for a while . Until that night TJ had gone to sleep while Jermaine was still watching T.V.  Jermaine had looked at the Screen Surprisingly and said “ WHAT THE what is that called again OHH its Rainbows End!!!!!!”

Jermaine had waited until TJ had woke up and said “ Hey TJ wake up Wake up I had been watching this ad and it showed this MEAN as Theme Park, that  just opened Should we go?” TJ woke up with a red face and said “ Umm I thought we were going to make it up to Level 15?” “ But I thought you were bored, Lets just go cause it has the Coolest and MOST dangerous looking Ride EVER!” Said Jermaine.

So then TJ and Jermaine had left  excitingly to see what  was going to happen. They had finally arrived and it looked like it was about to rain, but lucky it was only a Sunshower. They took their first steps into the Ride and by then they were as Nervous as EVER!!! There were two HUGE rides the Invader and the Rollercoaster. TJ looked at them both nervously until Jermaine Grabbed him and said “ Get Ready for the Rollercoaster”

They had got onto the ride and A LOT of people had already started screaming. It felt like you were going to fly into the sky then fall down again. It also felt like you were in a very Fast train.  The ride  had just Finished and TJ was Crying so hard he couldn’t Stop. It was one of the most scariest Rides ever. So thats when TJ wasn’t scared of Hights anymore.

Sina The Inventer

It was one hot day in Asia while people were working hard for Rice Planting. It was the most HOTTEST day ever. One day a Boy named Lee wanted to help so he yelled “  Stop working too hard I think you need some help” So that morning Lee went out to get some help, and only a few Volunteered to help.

Once a man named Pete had arrived to Asia and said “  Why do you like planting Rice why can’t you plant Carrots or something?”  Than a helper replied “ yeah lets plant more things not just Rice” So the Asians all started planting new things like, Carrots, Corn and things like that.

Then they all started making these things and by then. Asia was going to be one of the BEST countries that has be planting. By then Asia had been struggling for about a Week now and Plants had all died.

It was quite sad though because they had nothing left. Until one day a Girl named Sina had found these seeds lying on the ground, for a while. Then Sina had picked it up and by then she had invented a seed that grows Ice-Cream.