WALT: was to Show not Tell when writing a paragraph.
Stomping my feet as hard as I could I made all the kids Runaway. I lay down onto the couch as people had came knocking on our doors. As three girls came towards the door I yelled "Sorry Wrong House" with a scary voice. I had looked towards the door and more people had been stomping by. But then I looked and it was my Mum. Or was it??
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