Rainbows End The "New Theme Park" Narrative

Highlighted in Blue is my Mark and in the Yellow is my Friends. 

It was one of those hot Sunny days, where Boys had the house to themselves Playing Games All Day long. Summer had just started yesterday, so it was the second day of the MOST hottest days ever. TJ got bored and said to Jermaine “ Why bother play games can we do something  else?” Jermaine replied with a weird face “ Umm yeah why can't we just like watch a little bit of  Television”

It was like a miracle that they had turned of the Play Station for a while . Until that night TJ had gone to sleep while Jermaine was still watching T.V.  Jermaine had looked at the Screen Surprisingly and said “ WHAT THE what is that called again OHH its Rainbows End!!!!!!”

Jermaine had waited until TJ had woke up and said “ Hey TJ wake up Wake up I had been watching this ad and it showed this MEAN as Theme Park, that  just opened Should we go?” TJ woke up with a red face and said “ Umm I thought we were going to make it up to Level 15?” “ But I thought you were bored, Lets just go cause it has the Coolest and MOST dangerous looking Ride EVER!” Said Jermaine.

So then TJ and Jermaine had left  excitingly to see what  was going to happen. They had finally arrived and it looked like it was about to rain, but lucky it was only a Sunshower. They took their first steps into the Ride and by then they were as Nervous as EVER!!! There were two HUGE rides the Invader and the Rollercoaster. TJ looked at them both nervously until Jermaine Grabbed him and said “ Get Ready for the Rollercoaster”

They had got onto the ride and A LOT of people had already started screaming. It felt like you were going to fly into the sky then fall down again. It also felt like you were in a very Fast train.  The ride  had just Finished and TJ was Crying so hard he couldn’t Stop. It was one of the most scariest Rides ever. So thats when TJ wasn’t scared of Hights anymore.

( Me and Jordenne's Narrative) The Dumb explorer who meets Beyonce.

Once there was a man named Pete. He was an explorer, he was a dumb explorer that had been exploring the forest for YEARS and YEARS. While he was traveling, he suddenly heard music playing out of nowhere. Pete felt happy and started dancing. He hadn’t noticed that voice before.

He tracked the music by his ears. Then he found so many Monkeys dancing. Pete started laughing at them because he said they were no good. Then Pete started showing them how to dance.

He stopped dancing, and saw so many paths, he wanted to go to all of them but he knew there was only one way to go to where the music is coming from.  But then stupidly he went to the path on the left and came back with ripped clothes.

He went to the other path on right and came back with bare feet. Everywhere he went it was Dangerous.

Finally he had the chance to walk through the path in the middle that didn’t look bad at all. Walking with damaged body parts Pete started dancing even more and FINALLY saw Beyonce!!! He smelled with shock and also Danced very HARD with her too.

The Crazy Scientist who thought he was tough enough to be in a Blizzard!

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Huge Blizzards are really scary right. Well some Scientists were visiting Antarctica while out of nowhere a Blizzard had hit. A person named Jack had went out of the building to check how strong was it. By then he had never survived back. .  The Scientists had tried looking for him everywhere in Antarctica, but never had any Luck..

Jack had woke up and was trying to figure out where he was. He had lay on a big block of ice near the beach.  “ Ohh Noo I think that I have been caught in a Blizzard a Huge one” Jack said with shock. Then he layed back down and went back to Sleep.

then he was terrified.   Jack had woke up again with marks on his face, marks of a beck that had been  poking him. He woke and a bunch of Emperor Penguins were surrounding  around him. By then he had just found out that he was in Emperor Land.  With so many Emperor Penguins around him.  Jack had started to  get more and more information about Emperor Penguins.

While yelling everywhere for any sign of Scientists he said  " Hello anyone gonna Look for me" Jack said. Then all the bunch of Scientists had came to Emperor land. They had been shocked seeing Jack with Penguins. So then Jack scientists happy to get some information from Emperor Penguins. Hope that Jack wouldn't went into the Blizzard.!!

Thanks to Ana for Editing my writing.

Horror Story of the worst SINGER!! AHHHH!

It was one scary night in the forest while a singing competition was going on .  It was one of those nights where most of the police officers have their brake. Well passing by the bar which had the competition  going on a very powerful police officer dropped by.

And yelled “ this is not  a very amazing Singing Competition without me in it” Everybody looked at him with fear and said “ Oh oooh okay you can be in this competition  unless you don't scare us”  “ Okay” The Police Officer replied back. The police Office was the Last person to sing. Everbody else had a great by then when we go to The Police everybody got scared and closed their eyes.

Everybody thought he would have a great voice but when he had sang the first line everyone started yelling “ BOOOOOO BOOOO BBOOOO” So then the Police got so embarrassed and drove away.

Goldilocks Narrative

Walking through the woods, three bears went off to wait for their porridge to warm up. Suddenly a little girl named Goldilocks entered the three bears cottage. Yelling “ HELLO! Through the door nobody answered. Smelling that delicious porridge she sat on to Mother Bear’s chair and said “ To soft” Then she walked to Baby bear’s chair and sat then said “ this is just right.
As she finished eating her porridge she walked slowly up the stairs and into the three bears room. Into the Moms bed and said “ To soft” Into the Dad’s bed and said “ To hard” Walking fast to little ones bed she said “this is just right”

Off the bears came

Goldilocks: Goldilocks is a little girl that lives in the woods. She has blonde hair and it is curly. Her skin colour is tan. Goldilocks also lives near three bears in the woods.Goldilocks looks this was because she just got told off to get out of the Three Bears cottage. ( She looks Furious)

Baby bear: Baby bear is a little boy that has one Mom and one Dad. He also lives in the woods. The  little baby bear looks this way because he just finished sleeping. He is dressed this way because he is getting ready to go and join the circus also his Mom and Dad.

My Narrative Story About The Beach

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It was a nice Sunny day at the beach, and we had camp for school. Our group started our activities with Kayaking and Swimming. Swimming was so cool because we got to stand on the rocks and jump off it. I was so scared of the water it was so Cold and Windy.


Clumsily putting my foot into the water, I felt like I didn’t want to swim. But filled with courage my friend Iron, yelled at me “ Come on Sela get in because it is boring without you in the water”  So I got in with some excitement. Watching everybody doing bombs, I started doing it as well. I felt very scared.

This was one of our activities and I had fun doing it. Mostly we enjoyed swimming because we got to do anything we wanted but knew not to go any further than Mr Burt has said.  Standing on top of the rocks I waited for my turn to jump. I had to watch out for rocks under the water.


Jumping of the rocks it felt dangerous. Looking down made me so scared because the water looked so deep. I needed braveness inside me, so I jumped and made a big splash “ BOOM!” Watching the water go on every body I had another go. It didn’t feel that dangerous anymore.

If there was no rocks underneath then there would be no problem jumping of the rocks. There goes a nice Sunny day with camp and Swimming activities. Playing around and getting on to our next activity.

This was the best and only camp that I had been to. Kayaking would have been fun but we kept on heading in the wrong direction. Sadly our boat flipped over and we both fell out.

Our Narrative Imagination of a flood

Hello my name is Daniel. Well I am 9 years old  and school is over. There has been a flood in Japan,  it is a Huge  flood. This water looked like a swimming pool, but it was cold.

Many children started to come out from their houses and play with me. Seeing my friends coming out to find me I felt so afraid because I had made a bet.  I was so scared that I might lose.

I had to jump because me and my friend had a bet .He told me if we do rock paper scissors, and if I lose then I  have to jump  into that water and do a BOMB as best as I could . Me and  my friend had this challenge because we were checking who can do the biggest BOMB and I  Daniel did not want to do a small bomb.

More kids  came out ready to watch me jump into the water. I did a HUGE BOMB and the water SPLASHED on my friends’ faces.


We loved this flood because we like to play in the  water. But there was a problem, the parents didn’t like this.  This was too hard that our things needed to be moved away from the water. Lucky I didn’t have to help, only my brothers and sisters did.