Camp Bentzon Presentation

Here is a little snippet of what happened at our Year 6 Camp. You should watch it to see what happens in Camp Bentzon. So hope you will Enjoy!!

My Friends

Here is a Presentation. That is actually showing, and telling you things about my Friends. Hope you enjoy!!

My Writing Test ( End Of The Year) 2013

The Sun had just risen and by then it was time to Milk the sheep. Getting dressed and ready  I walked slowly to the Barn. I was halfway there and by then the Sun had shone bright into my eyes.

As soon as I got near the Barn I heard this  voice it was a SCARY. It was kind of a whisper too. I had started to panic when I got closer to the shed I got quieter and quieter. I had looked behind me and no one was there. I was the only one home everyone went to the Carnival. While trying to run back home the Noise got louder and louder.

I tried walking backwards and it still didn't work. So then it got even more creepier. It was almost Bedtime and I still hadn't done my job.  So then I just got on with it and kept on walking. There it goes again “ Mooooo!!” I hadn't heard that sound before.

Until I got to the Barn I looked around and it looked like we had a new animal. I wasn't sure what it was until dad came home and told me it was a Cow. As I whispered to myself “ Finally I got the chance to know what that was” Then I heard another voice and it sounded like a person calling Dad and I’s name.

But that was weird cause only Me, Dad and baby Leo was the only one’s who were living in the Farm. It was maybe Mum. Whispering telling us to get inside already. She was right though cause it looked like it was about to rain.  By then Mum’s Spirit had gave us good Luck.

Halloween

WALT: was to Show not Tell when writing a paragraph. 

Stomping my feet as hard as I could I made all the kids Runaway. I lay down onto the couch as people had came knocking on our doors. As three girls came towards the door  I yelled "Sorry Wrong House" with a scary voice.  I had looked towards the door and more people had been stomping by. But then I looked and it was my Mum. Or was it??