Tuesday, December 24, 2013

Almost Christmas


I would like to wish You ALL a Merry Christmas. May Santa Claus give you a Great present. You shall all sleep in a Great family and House tonight. I wish you all a GREAT Christmas for this year. MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERYONE. May God Bless you on Jesus's Born Day. Merry Christmas Everyone. May you all Sleep Tight in Bed.  Ohh and Sorry for the Late Blog Post. 

Monday, December 2, 2013

320th Post Overall


Happy Birthday Blog. Did you know that my blog has posted 320  post Overall. Every since I had started blogging I really enjoyed IT. Did you know that I had started blogging  ever since I was a year 4. I LOVE blogging. Did you know that I also blog during the holiday too.   

SO HAPPY BIRTHDAY BLOG!! 320th post!! 

Wednesday, November 27, 2013

Camp Bentzon Presentation


Here is a little snippet of what happened at our Year 6 Camp. You should watch it to see what happens in Camp Bentzon. So hope you will Enjoy!!

Tuesday, November 12, 2013

My Friends

Here is a Presentation. That is actually showing, and telling you things about my Friends. Hope you enjoy!!

Wednesday, November 6, 2013

My Writing Test ( End Of The Year) 2013


The Sun had just risen and by then it was time to Milk the sheep. Getting dressed and ready  I walked slowly to the Barn. I was halfway there and by then the Sun had shone bright into my eyes.

As soon as I got near the Barn I heard this  voice it was a SCARY. It was kind of a whisper too. I had started to panic when I got closer to the shed I got quieter and quieter. I had looked behind me and no one was there. I was the only one home everyone went to the Carnival. While trying to run back home the Noise got louder and louder.

I tried walking backwards and it still didn't work. So then it got even more creepier. It was almost Bedtime and I still hadn't done my job.  So then I just got on with it and kept on walking. There it goes again “ Mooooo!!” I hadn't heard that sound before.

Until I got to the Barn I looked around and it looked like we had a new animal. I wasn't sure what it was until dad came home and told me it was a Cow. As I whispered to myself “ Finally I got the chance to know what that was” Then I heard another voice and it sounded like a person calling Dad and I’s name.

But that was weird cause only Me, Dad and baby Leo was the only one’s who were living in the Farm. It was maybe Mum. Whispering telling us to get inside already. She was right though cause it looked like it was about to rain.  By then Mum’s Spirit had gave us good Luck.

Friday, November 1, 2013

Halloween

WALT: was to Show not Tell when writing a paragraph. 

Stomping my feet as hard as I could I made all the kids Runaway. I lay down onto the couch as people had came knocking on our doors. As three girls came towards the door  I yelled "Sorry Wrong House" with a scary voice.  I had looked towards the door and more people had been stomping by. But then I looked and it was my Mum. Or was it??  

Wednesday, October 30, 2013

Rugby League World Cup 2013 (Free Blog Writing)

These past few weeks and days. The Rugby World Cup had started. Rugby world Cup is for League NOT Union. It is going to be the BEST Rugby World Cup ever. I am going for the team Tonga and the Kiwis, which is New Zealand.  

Why you may ask? Well I am from the Island of tonga and I live in New Zealand. Samoa and New Zealand has already played now we are just waiting for Scotland and Tonga to Play. The Score for the Samoa vs Kiwis game was 42 to Kiwis and 24 for Samoa. So that is a quite a BIG score. Hard luck for Samoa though.

I am still waiting for the Tonga and Scotland game to Start. 
SO GO TONGA AND KIWIS WOO HOO!!!!

Rainbows End The "New Theme Park" Narrative

Highlighted in Blue is my Mark and in the Yellow is my Friends. 

It was one of those hot Sunny days, where Boys had the house to themselves Playing Games All Day long. Summer had just started yesterday, so it was the second day of the MOST hottest days ever. TJ got bored and said to Jermaine “ Why bother play games can we do something  else?” Jermaine replied with a weird face “ Umm yeah why can't we just like watch a little bit of  Television”

It was like a miracle that they had turned of the Play Station for a while . Until that night TJ had gone to sleep while Jermaine was still watching T.V.  Jermaine had looked at the Screen Surprisingly and said “ WHAT THE what is that called again OHH its Rainbows End!!!!!!”

Jermaine had waited until TJ had woke up and said “ Hey TJ wake up Wake up I had been watching this ad and it showed this MEAN as Theme Park, that  just opened Should we go?” TJ woke up with a red face and said “ Umm I thought we were going to make it up to Level 15?” “ But I thought you were bored, Lets just go cause it has the Coolest and MOST dangerous looking Ride EVER!” Said Jermaine.

So then TJ and Jermaine had left  excitingly to see what  was going to happen. They had finally arrived and it looked like it was about to rain, but lucky it was only a Sunshower. They took their first steps into the Ride and by then they were as Nervous as EVER!!! There were two HUGE rides the Invader and the Rollercoaster. TJ looked at them both nervously until Jermaine Grabbed him and said “ Get Ready for the Rollercoaster”

They had got onto the ride and A LOT of people had already started screaming. It felt like you were going to fly into the sky then fall down again. It also felt like you were in a very Fast train.  The ride  had just Finished and TJ was Crying so hard he couldn’t Stop. It was one of the most scariest Rides ever. So thats when TJ wasn’t scared of Hights anymore.

Friday, October 25, 2013

Sina The Inventer


It was one hot day in Asia while people were working hard for Rice Planting. It was the most HOTTEST day ever. One day a Boy named Lee wanted to help so he yelled “  Stop working too hard I think you need some help” So that morning Lee went out to get some help, and only a few Volunteered to help.

Once a man named Pete had arrived to Asia and said “  Why do you like planting Rice why can’t you plant Carrots or something?”  Than a helper replied “ yeah lets plant more things not just Rice” So the Asians all started planting new things like, Carrots, Corn and things like that.

Then they all started making these things and by then. Asia was going to be one of the BEST countries that has be planting. By then Asia had been struggling for about a Week now and Plants had all died.

It was quite sad though because they had nothing left. Until one day a Girl named Sina had found these seeds lying on the ground, for a while. Then Sina had picked it up and by then she had invented a seed that grows Ice-Cream.

Tuesday, October 22, 2013

Pt England has Gone Google



This is a video that Google has made of Pt England School. Why? Well they had found out that our school was using Netbooks and and also  Chrome Book. I really enjoy watching this movie thats why I am sharing it with YOU. Hope you enjoy :D

Monday, October 21, 2013

Taxes

These past few days we have been studying and learning about the IRD and Taxes with Miss Wood. Why you may ask? Well this week we have the opportunity to visit Wellington and talk to the people who work for the IRD.  You may be asking what does IRD stand for or what do they do? Well, the IRD stands for Inland Revenue Department, they are responsible for collecting YOUR Taxes!


What Would Happen If No-one Paid their Taxes?
If people didn't pay their taxes things would start to disappear. If you could imagine, people who are poor could be living on the streets. While the rich people would be alright ,  I have found out that India is a country that has poor and rich people living like this at the same time.

For example, mainly poor people would find having a home really hard. I believe that the rich people in India should help with the poor and pay their taxes. This is a lesson that we in New Zealand can learn from.




Last week we got to Interview our Teacher Mr S and a Dental Nurse named Heidi. Hannah and I asked them questions about their Student Loans and Taxes. We made movies with people who knows what Taxes are. 

We interviewed Mr S about his Student Loan.


Then we interviewed Heidi Our Dental Nurse. How do taxes pay for our Dental Clinic?

What are Taxes?

Tax is money that is given to the Government. Did you know that the Government spends money on Schools, Education, the Army, Navy, Dental Clinics, Social Security, Welfare and even Hospitals. Could you imagine a place without people getting into these places? The government collects the money from people in New Zealand who have jobs.

Did you know that Churches also have a kind of Tax. It is usually called Tithing. Churches collect this money to use, for Youth Camps, Chairs in their church and for members who are sick.

GST is another type of tax that takes 15% of what you pay for. It could be clothes, shoes or food. GST stands for Goods and Service Tax. 

Retelling A Story Of (A Foal Is Born)


One Day there was a horse named Del. The owner had a son and while the Mum/Owner, was doing things. Her son Ryan was ALWAYS keeping his eyes on her well I mean the horse Del. Something Surprising was going on.

 It was HUGELY surprising well Del was having Foal/Baby Horse.Ryan had always Del for about Eleven months, Ryan had watched Del grow Bigger and Bigger. Ryan said to Mum one night " It'll be born any day now"

The next morning, Ryan woke up, and his mum was down in the horse paddock. There was a NEW foal lying close to Del. It's a filly," said Dad. "She's just been born Can I go Stroke her?" asked Ryan.

Ryan looked across the paddock with his binoculars. The foal was half-covered with a sack.   That sack was actually inside of Del's Stomach. That's weird right. They had called the Foal Dotsi. So then Del and Dotsi got measured by the vet.

Why? Well they Vet measured their temperature to see if they were Healthy enough or not. So then the measuring and using the temperature began and Dotsi and Del were VERY healthy.  "So then Dotsi will grow up to be a tall mare just like her mother" Said Ryan. 

Tuesday, October 15, 2013

A Little Snippet




Here is a Little Snippet of what I had been creating in Term 3. Well it is an Animation. As part of studying Life's A Stage. This is myAnimation that I had been creating. It is ALL about Snow White. Hope you Enjoy!!!!!!

Monday, October 14, 2013

My Holiday

                                                                                           
Well my Holiday may look quite BORING. But for the last to days was quite GREAT. Like yesterday I got to Visit Nana in the Hospital. Also I got to go to the Night Market that was held at the Pakuranga Westfield Shopping Centre.  Usually its packed but this time it wasn't. 

The other GREAT part of my holiday was going Shopping. Sounds COOL right. I really miss Nana. 

Immersion Assembly


I'm A Farmer and I Grow It! from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.
This Morning. Oh Well every morning of a new Term. The teachers had performed some examples of what we would be learning about this term. Team 4 is going to be learning about Farming.  And I am REALLY excited to be learning about this. Why? Well did you know my Uncle is a farmer and that's why I am REALLY excited.

Did you know that one of my dreams were to help a Farmer. I really enjoyed watching Team 4's video. Why?? You may ask well it was a snippet of what it would look in a Farm. Well did you know that the food you eat come from a Farm. Like Wheat-Bix for an example it is made from Wheat in the farm. 

This is a Video that is quite weird and Funny at the same time. So check it out :D  

Saturday, October 12, 2013

Making Home Made Bread


Last Night I got the Opportunity to help my Mother Cook Home made Bread. We all had begged our mum to make this and she actually did for the first time. It was one of the BEST bread's that I have tasted. I got to help Mum put the Dough into the Oven.

Thursday, October 10, 2013

304th Post


Did you notice that this is my 304th Post since I have started Blogging. I had started blogging when I was a year 4 in Room 13. Blogging is a HUGE part of me. I LOVE blogging. Blogging is 1 of the BEST things that I have done. Make sure to leave some feedback On my posts. 

Wednesday, October 9, 2013

Another BORING holiday

Since we've started our school holidays. These past two weeks have been so BORING. All I have done these weeks are Clean our house and go to our aunties. I think that school is better than staying home. I miss going school.

Monday, October 7, 2013

The 2nd Week Of the Holidays AHHH!!!!!!!

Last Week was the 1st Week of the School Holidays. Today was the first day Of the 2nd Week and by far it is BORING. Usually we'll be at a Birthday or at my Cousins. But this week we have just stayed home and been to my cousins Nana's Funeral. It was quite Sad. So what are going to do this Week?

Saturday, October 5, 2013

Part Of Our Family Has Left


You may notice that A LOT of people have left New Zealand to live in Australia. Well that has happened to my cousins. They have left because their dad had found a job their. They were one of the Most Closest families we'd had. I miss them SOO much. Bye Tualau Family :( 

Friday, October 4, 2013

All About Me

Here is a presentation that I have created. All  about Me. Hope you enjoy because I put A LOT of Effort into it.

301st Post

Did you Notice that this is my 301st Post. I had notices this post be fore I had even posted my Post before this one. 301 posts was my Goal since I had first started Blogging. 301 posts that's a BIG number. I hope you read the rest of my posts and leave some Feedback.

Inspired By The X Factor U.S.A

These past few weeks The X Factor U.S.A has started. And I have been  Inspired by Rion Paige. What had inspired?? Well she was actually 13yrs of age but looked like she was in the 20's. Rion Paige was the Best Singer that I have seen perform on X Factor. So Please Vote for Rion Paige!!

Wednesday, October 2, 2013

My Holiday Part 1

Today was the 3rd day Of the school Holiday and it feels like an Ordinary day. But SO boring. All I have done this week is Sleep, watch TV, Cleaning and Playing around out side. It was quite Fun but it would be better if we went somewhere fun Like to the pools or something.

Anyways this is the 3rd school Holidays and its SO BORING. I've got nothing to do. Well cleaning is the Number 1 thing that we do here at our house. That's why I LOVE cleaning at school too.

Film Festival's Coming Up!!!!!

In the past week my class has been creating and editing Movies for the Film Festival. The Film Festival is a Festival that is shown and held at the Sylvia Park Theatre. At the moment a group of girls and I have been waiting for this moment to come.

We had created a movie about Next Top Model for Princesses. The Film Festival is usally performed to a bunch of Schools in the Manaiakalani Cluster. The Film Festival is also held in term 4. And is probably held in Week 4 of Term 4. You should check out this site to see what you thought of the Movies from Last year.

Monday, September 30, 2013

My Wordle


In the past few weeks Our Maths Class have been working on a VERY Cool site. It is called Wordle. It is a site that puts Keywords Altogether. We got o choose a bunch Of words from Literacy Class Or Maths and I got the Opportunity to Choose Maths. The words that are Big are words that I really enjoy using In maths. The ones that are small are words that I need to work on. Like for an example Fractions is what I need to work On. I really Hoped you enjoyed MY  Wordle

Monday, September 9, 2013

KiwiYo!!


Last Saturday I got the chance to celebrate one of my friends Birthdays. We had the Coolest day of our Lives.  It was Lesieli's Birthday and we got to buy Frozen Yoghurt from KiwiYo!! 

You may be wondering what it is. Well it  is a Ice Cream Store where you can  weigh and choose whatever you want you your Ice Cream. We had ALOT of fun celebrating Lesieli's Birthday.  You should REALLY try KiwiYo!! 


Wednesday, September 4, 2013

Happy Birthday Lesieli!!!


Today is one of my  Coolest and Amazing person (Kind Of Cousin's Birthday) I think you are going to guess who it is well it is Lesieli. I just wanted to say a BIG HAPPPY BIRTHDAY TO you. we wish you a great and blessing day today. HAPPY BIRTHDAY. May our Heavenly Father be with you. She is 11 years of age!!!

Monday, September 2, 2013

Tongan Language Week




Did you know that today is the first day of Tongan Language Week. Since I am from the Island Of Tonga I have been delighted to create this Picture. Well if you have a friend that is Tongan ask them to teach you words. I had been waiting for this week. I would LOVE to teach people this GREAT language. 

Monday, August 26, 2013

My Brother Made It Into The Auckland Team YAY!!!!


I have been waiting for this moment to come. Did you know that My older Brother had made it into the Auckland under 16 team. My brother had just came from Mt Wellington and had made into the Auckland team. This is one of the Most COOLEST thing that has happened in Rugby for my family.

Rugby League is one of the most Greatest talent that Runs in the Family. I have been wanting to play Rugby League since I was little. But my mother sad that something Bad might happen. 

The Auckland under 16 team had Won their first game Last Week on Saturday. The game was held at the Mt Albert Stadium. This was my brothers VErY FIRST time being in the Auckland team. It was so good to see a team Win!!! He is also from a College called " St Pauls or they may call it  Sangata Paulo" Which is in Ponsinby Right here in Auckland New Zealand. 
  
SO GO AUCKLAND UNDER 16'S!!!!

            



Thursday, August 22, 2013

Reading Interview

CROSS COUNTRY IS HELD TODAY!! Go MATAATUA ( GREEN)


Well many of the teachers have been waiting for this moment to come. You may be wondering why they are waiting for this moment to come. Actually they are probably SO excited to have Cross Country. I really HATE Running. I would like it if it was Athletics.

But it is actually "The Fun Run" Why do they call it a fun run and it is not Fun.  Well today is the actual day!!! Our run is going to be the longest run I've ever raced in!! I am in the team "Mataatua or in English ( Green) "  Here is a song that I have created for Mataatua. " Its feeling Good all day every single day because Mataatua's here ALL Day" YAY!!!

                                                                 SO GO MATAATUA!!! YAY

Monday, August 19, 2013

Mt Wellington WON The Shield


YAY!! Since my brother has been playing for the team Mt Wellington League Club. I have usually been to EVERY game of my brothers.  Did you know that the older team of Mt Wellington had WON The Shield. I reckon that they will always be a winner!! Well the Older team is different to my brothers team. Did you know that their team ALWAYS loses EVERY game. That is weird because the older team always WINS their games but the younger team SERIOUSLY they Lose all the time. That's why they should always turn up to every training. 

Friday, August 16, 2013

My Reading DLO ( Digital Learning Object) Term 3


S,A,Y DLO Reading from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

Here is a DLO that I have created with a bunch of girls. We were retelling the Fable " The Tortoise And The Ducks"This Fable was created by Aesop. We had REALLY enjoyed making this DLO. I had created this movie with Ana and Quasia! We are going to show what happened in that story!! Hope you enjoy!!

Wednesday, August 14, 2013

Mt Brothers Rugby Training


WOW That is SOO Cool. Did you know that nearly my whole Family really enjoys playing Rugby?? This afternoon my little brother has his Rugby training. For the Team Mt Wellington.  I really think that they should all turn up because they REALLY need to practice on their tackling. 

There game is always held on Saturdays. I always turn up to their games and they ALWAYS lose a game. I bet you my youngest brother can tackle!!!

Monday, August 12, 2013

Sela And the Three Bears ( My Narrative)


Once upon a time there three bears who lived in the middle of the woods. They had woke up while the Mother Bear was making porridge. While the mother bear was making their Breakfast the father and the Son had also woke up. Then Mother Bear yelled “ Hurry up boys before your porridge is going to get cold”

As soon as they heard Mother bear yell “ hurry up” they had ran down stairs as fast as they could. It actually took them a very long time to get down stairs. It also felt like it was past an hour. They had finally got down stairs. While the porridge had already been eaten.

They had all wondered how did it get eaten so fast. “ There was a possibility?” As soon as they had seen there porridge eaten, they had went out for a walk hunting down who had eaten their porridge. It had seemed that they were making a big deal out of a PORRIDGE!!!

I had just found out that it was a mysterious girl named Sela. Who had been spying on “The Bear Family” and had hated that family for a very long time.  The place where the bears lived was actually where Sela’s family had lived.

Her family had been living there since 2009, and the bears had just moved in a couple of months ago. Sela had REALLY hated that family. She even wanted to kill one of the children.

It had came to the next day while The Bears were still looking for the Mysterious person?? While the Mother had just whispered with a red face “ It is alright we are just worrying about a Porridge I could make it everyday if you want me to” Replying with a happy face the father said “ Okay if you don’t want to make a big deal out of it then we won’t ”

Thursday night and the family was getting ready for bed. Sela had sneaked through the window and into the room. Finally she had started cracking everything breaking the mirrors and also messing their bed.

The family had finally got to their room. It was REALLY MESSY. The Family had got SO angry they have security camera’s EVERYWHERE. The Father bear had walked out of the house and yelled “ Come out come out wherever you are” And all you could see is a cat walk out of the bushes and Boom the Father had kicked it as far as the cat could go.

TO BE CONTINUED (Dunn Dunn Dunn).............

Saturday, August 10, 2013

I Am On DIVISION YAY!!!!!



This term I have been waiting " FOR the day to come" ad it has came. YAY. You may be wandering I am so HAPPY. Well in Xtramath I had been waiting to move onto Division. First I was on Multiplication. I am really getting used to Dvision now! Here is a link to the Xtramath site. 

Thursday, August 8, 2013

The Ugly Duckling



Once Upon A Time in a town called Glen Innes. Had been so poor and so Disgusting. This town had a lot of  rubbish. There is also a polluted Creek in this town. Glen Innes has now been changed you may search it up and it is Disgusting. But those are photos from long long ago. Glen Innes is now a Green and beautiful town.

In that town had lived ducks that were just about to lay their eggs. The Mother had to lay her eggs all alone. The Father was always gone. She was going to lay 6 eggs. It had came to the next day and 5 of her eggs had hatched. There was the last egg to hatch it was so big and it was Gray.
The Mother thought that it was going to be the BEST one of them all.

She had been waiting for a long time get that duckling out. It had came to the next week and it still hadn't hatched. Mother Duck had thought to herself “ Wow I can’t take it any more sooner or later I am going to leave this egg and teach the others how to swim. Then it was Thursday and the egg had FINALLY hatched.

When it had came out the egg  was one of the most ugliest eggs I had ever seen. People had been teasing the mother of laying that egg. But it had came to a day and the egg had turned a little bit prettier. And looked normal like the others.

My Reading Follow UP of The Tortoise and The Ducks


Title: The Tortoise and the Ducks

Author: Aesop


Characters (names, personalities, strengths, weaknesses):
The Tortoise: Can’t Fly, had its house on his back, wanted to see the World.
The Ducks: Helpful. good Friends.

Setting (Where is the story set. Describe the place in detail):
Near a pond in a Creek.

What was the problem?
Well the problem was that the Tortoise didn’t get to see the World.

What was the solution?
Then along came Ducks and said that they could fly him to see the Countryside.

What was the Moral of the Story? Don't be Vanity

Tuesday, August 6, 2013

My DLO Of Using the Place Value (Single Digits Strategy)



This term in our Maths Class we have chosen to use different strategies for Multiplication. I have chosen to make this DLO for using the Place Value - Single Digits. Hope you enjoy because I put A LOT of Effort into it.

Monday, August 5, 2013

Happy Birthday Aunty


Today is another Special day for two of my aunties. Which are 40 something. I just wanted to say happy BIRTHDAY!!!! And here is a little song " Happy Birthday to you happy Birthday To you Happy Birthday dear Aunties Happy Birthday to you" May go d be with you and bless you on this day.

ALSO DID YOU KNOW THAT THIS IS MY 280th post!!!!!!!!!!!

Sunday, August 4, 2013

I WAS coming 1st but NOT Anymore

Over the weekend I was REALLY working my butt off in Maths Whizz. I was coming 1st but NOT anymore. On Sunday Liku had taken over me by beating my score. That's Why I really enjoy using Maths Whizz - I love competition!

Saturday, August 3, 2013

Happy Birthday Tisa ( My Brother)

Today is my little Brothers Birthday which is Tisa. I just wanted to say HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! Because he is the BEST Brother EVER. I mean Second.

Friday, August 2, 2013

Immersion Assembly


Our Immersion Assemblies are always held on the first Day of the term. This term we have been chosen to study the Topic "Life's A Stage" As part of studying this Topic the teachers had performed a Example of what we would be learning. For an example my group of teachers had performed us a play from The Three Little Pigs.

"Give around of Applause for Team 4 and ready for Team 5" As Mr James Taylor "Mr But' Said. Team 4 is actually the group of teachers by us Year 5's and 6's. Their act was the three little pigs. When they finished it was time for Team 5 which was the year 7's and 8's. 

They had created a movie which was SO COOL. It started off  with Beyonce's song "If I were a Boy" Then the song had started and acting as the Boys were the Teachers (Women) I really enjoyed watching it. And pretending they were Boys. 

Then it came to a part when it said "If I were a Girl" Acted by Mr Barks. Which looked way better.  And he actually did his own version of being a Women. After the movie had finished we had all applauded, and that was my BEST act that I had watched. " I am Mr James Taylor Have a great Morning" Mr Burt said. 

Then the Music started Playing and it was time to leave. So that was my favorite Part.    

Thursday, August 1, 2013

Be in Top of The Schools in Maths Whizz!!


Well this past few day and Weeks I have been trying to work my butt off for Maths. As you can see my grade for Maths was Quite LOW!! In Maths Whizz I think that you could Achieve way past your age. You could also that this time I'm TOP OF THE SCHOOL. Actually I am coming 8th YAY!!!

Follow Up of The Wolf Fable


Title: The Wolf Fable

Author: Pie Corbett ( Original by Aesop)

Characters (names, personalities, strengths, weaknesses):
The Wolf: Stealer, Always Hungry, Loves to eat Meat.
Shepherd: The Sheep Owner, The Hero of the Farm,
Flocks: a group of Sheep.

Setting (Where is the story set. Describe the place in detail):
In a Farm near the Forest.

What was the problem? Well the problem was when the Wolf was trying to steal the Flock.

What was the solution? That the Wolf had died before he was about to eat the Sheep.

What was the Moral of the Story? Do not pretend to be something that you are not.


My favourite part of the story was? Well my Favourite part of the Story was when the Shepherd got to Kill the Wolf!!

Retelling The Race of the Tortoise and the Hare


Hello my name is Kent “ the SLOW Poke” I really enjoy eating plants. One of my favorite things to eat is the leaves off the Gum Tree. When it gets to races I usually come last. I don’t know why I join running Competition. I am one of the most slowest animals on the farm.

Again I do not know why I joined it. But I do not care about what other people say if I come last, unless I came something in the competition. The racing Competition is coming up and I am NOT feeling worried at the moment.

In a race I always come last. But only once I had came first, and had taken over Speedy AKA The Devil. Speedy is one of those fast animals on the farm and sometimes she can be OVER BOARD with running.

The race competition  had been postponed for today and I was quite pumped. Speedy had always thought that she would win EVERY race. So the race had started and well I was as SLOW as a snail.

I had been right behind Speedy, and it looked like she was about to go to sleep. While passing by Speedy, it looked like he had already been dead asleep!! So it looked like I was about to win.

I had already crossed the finish line and he was still sleeping. I couldn’t believe it I had beaten her again!!!!! Speedy had woke up and Crossed the finish line and yelled “ Hello is anyone there where is my prize?” Then Kent had arrived and said “ Well you lost again”


Then Kent had wandering around like a Champion. Now I really feel pumped for the next Race.